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Sometimes I wonder if there’s good in the sky;
If it all floats up after passing us by, because
I can almost feel it escaping me after I
Look you in the eyes and make you cry.

It’s porcelain that will
Be the death of me.


Porcelain, my skyward muse,
I am porcelain, but a lighter blue,
And you
Are hiding secrets behind the glass
Hiding so much behind the glass

What do you think when you make me yours?
I look to the fine lines between the blinds
And imagine I’m in the sun
[in the sun]

Sometimes you’re everything I want, but
Sometimes I just pretend
[porcelain]


Music in the background, the salvation I wish I’d had,
From a nightmare that’s half nightmare, and I
Want to tell you that if
You were a stranger, I could disengage;
If you were anyone else, I would’ve disengaged by now.

Three weeks gone but it was a mistake
That I will never forget, in a beautiful house
On a quiet night with a sunset like the martyr Angels shattering Hell.
Three weeks gone but I still can’t forget
Her name, hoarsely whispered in the dark.

Can you hear me when the world is roaring in your ears?
I listen for you amid the tears, but
Sometimes you’re in the tears and I
Have nowhere else to go.

I love you, but
I can’t fight for a graveyard
And baby, you’re digging deep, with the
coffins piling up behind you like
Jagged sculptures in the snow.

I already wrote your eulogy twice,
And now we’re just waiting on
You to say goodbye to your last chance.
This is bitter, in the snow
This is so sweet, in the snow
I’d kiss you goodbye and bury you,
Then freeze to death in the snow, trying to steal you back to life.

Just so you know, baby,
I fall away
So easily, with grace, like
The way the snow starts out softly and
Slides into December's dead embrace
[while I’m trying to steal you back to life]
©2008-2010 ~write-it-in-the-sky
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Author's Comments

First decent thing in a looong time.
Writer's block still there =[
Please comment, I haven't submitted anything in a long time and I don't know how I'm doing compared to my old stuff.
Thankyou!!! :blowkiss:

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:iconb00kah0lic:
Well I already told you my opinion. =)
And what the part that stuck out the most as well.
But I really like te part

"I love you, but
I can’t fight for a graveyard
And baby, you’re digging deep, with the
coffins piling up behind you"
:icon72-tour:
Wow. This is my favorite thing you've ever written. It's absolutly beauitiful.

Some of my favorite lines:

"I already wrote your eulogy twice,"
"Sometimes you’re everything I want, but
Sometimes I just pretend "

But my complete favorite of this is:

"This is bitter, in the snow
This is so sweet, in the snow
I’d kiss you goodbye and bury you,"

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I like this thing I am, Come on I'll kill you.
:iconjadetiger788:
I have little to say that I still like your style and (even though I am a bit of a hypocrite -I haven't posted anything for ages) please keep writing for us!

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:iconwrite-it-in-the-sky:
thankyouu! :)
so we seriously need to catch up.
what has my fellow drama-magnet been up to?
:iconwrite-it-in-the-sky:
wow thank you! :faint:
I had no idea, I thought it was going to suck.
Oh and thankyou for the fav!!! much appreciated :hug:
:icon72-tour:
Mhmm, and thank you for writing it!

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I like this thing I am, Come on I'll kill you.
:iconjadetiger788:
LOL DRAMA!
Well, my girlfriend and myself have been kept busy trying to be discreet around our mutual friends (yeah, I know, but I was bi before it was cool!)
Uhm, I'm playing ma cello in a children's musical with a hormonal trombonist...
And the School Certificate (big Australian test in yr 10) is coming up, so fun fun fun!
How bout youse?

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:iconflytoface:
i love it.
you somehow have this incredible talent of imagery.
:iconwrite-it-in-the-sky:
thanks!
wait like what? :-\

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